Sweet. I love the gesture on the leading hand (the whole leading arm is lovely, in fact.) It's great to see a "scene" from you, and wonderful to see some pencil work. Unsurprisingly, you are a wizard with the graphite, much like with the oils.
Thank you very much!! As cool as that would be my past experience with art directors has soured me on the freelance game. Especially when there is a committee of them that don't communicate with each other.